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ZAGF Chapter 29 by ~mancan71:iconmancan71:



Zim’s face paled at the sight of Dib.

“Uh. Hey Dib,” he said trying to be nice so he didn’t have to deal with him.

“Who are you?” Dib asked not recognizing Zim in his new disguise.

Gaz smiled and got up. She wanted to see Dib’s face when he saw that it was Zim.

“I want you to take one good guess,” Gaz said putting her arms around Zim’s neck from behind.

Dib gave Gaz a strange look for a minute before looking back at Zim. Zim gave a grin. Dib thought for a moment before his eyes went wide with surprise.

“Zim!?” Dib cried in surprise.

“For crying out loud Dib! Do we have to go through this every time you see me?” he asked.

Dib grew angry and right hooked Zim in the jaw. Zim fell to the ground landing on his back. Gaz had a shocked face. She gave Dib an angry look, but before she could do anything Dib went on top of Zim and started punching him. Zim tried to protect himself, but Dib kept getting past his arms. Gaz grabbed Dib from behind and pulled him off Zim. Zim rolled over onto his knees and tried to get up. Dib struggled to get out of Gaz’s grip.

“Let me go Gaz!” Dib shouted struggling ferociously.

“No!” she shouted back still holding him.

Zim got up and made a fist like he was about to punch Dib, but before he could Tak got in between the two with her spider legs and stopped Zim.

“What in the world is wrong with you two?” she shouted.

Tallulah came towards Zim with Theo, Mimi, and Gir behind her. Theo was still playing the Game Slave 4.

“What’s going on?” Tallulah asked.

“These two got into a fight,” Gaz said.

“I give one stupid comment and this idiot starts punching me in the face,” Zim yelled.

“You should never have came back Zim! I’m going to destroy you!” Dib shouted.

Tak slapped Dib in the face.

“Ow! What did you do that for?” he yelled trying to rub his face but having Gaz’s hold on him making it impossible to do so.

“You’re an idiot! That’s why!” she yelled using her spider legs to get in his face.

Dib got out of Gaz’s grip and punched Tak in the squeedalyspooch. She fell to the ground at Zim’s feet. Zim had a shocked face and bent down to Tak to see if she was alright. She held her stomach tightly. She couldn’t breathe. Zim picked Tak up and sat down. He put her on his lap.

“Hey. You ok?” he asked softly.

Tak nodded.

“I’ll…be fine…in a minute…” she panted.

Zim smiled and stood up with Tak in his arms. Dib heard something to his left and right. It sounded like murmuring. He looked around to see that their fighting had led to a lot of unnecessary attention and made a whole crowd swarm around them.

“How dare you hurt that poor child!” someone in the crowd of people yelled.

“That is no child! It’s a…oh what’s the use? No one ever believes me any way,” Dib said folding his arms.

Tak got the air back into her and Zim put her down. She looked over at Dib. She shook her head in disappointment.

“I hate you now,” she said before walking away.

Zim, Gaz, Tallulah, Gir, Theo, and Mimi ran after Tak. Dib just stood where he was, dumbfounded. Everyone walked away leaving Dib. He looked at the ground and then walked away wondering what she meant by “I hate you now”.
©2008 ~mancan71
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dang this is short! :shakefist: i at one point moved some part of this chapter into chapter 28, making this shorter. sorry it's so short. forgive me! :cries:

tallulah and theo@me
invader zim@jhonen vasquez

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~zimhatesu:iconzimhatesu: May 12, 2008, 7:12:58 PM
:cry: POOR TAK!!!

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~mancan71:iconmancan71: May 13, 2008, 4:44:37 AM
yea. T_T dibby hurt poor takky.

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i'll come out and play as soon as i'm out of this straight jacket! ok? :crazy:

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~zim143:iconzim143: May 13, 2008, 5:26:17 AM Mood: Sadness
i think that chapter waz great i feel bad that tak got punched in the sqweedlyspoch it got to hurt.

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don't hate the rainbow
~ZAGRclub:iconZAGRclub: May 13, 2008, 9:17:28 AM Mood: Wow!
oooh the violence and how could Tak let Dib sucker punch her?!?!?!? I am on the edge on what will happen now!

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Gaz:mangapunksai::heart:Zim:jarkinajar: =:date: ZAGR :+favlove: The underdog of pairings! Cheer for the underdog!
~mancan71:iconmancan71: May 13, 2008, 12:38:26 PM
yea. poor tak.

and thank you!

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i'll come out and play as soon as i'm out of this straight jacket! ok? :crazy:

90% of teens moved on to Rap music, if your still one of the 10% that rocks out everyday add this to your sig.
~mancan71:iconmancan71: May 13, 2008, 12:38:56 PM
Tak just doesn't want to fight at the moment i guess. ^^; thanks a ton.

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i'll come out and play as soon as i'm out of this straight jacket! ok? :crazy:

90% of teens moved on to Rap music, if your still one of the 10% that rocks out everyday add this to your sig.
~zim143:iconzim143: May 13, 2008, 2:57:18 PM Mood: Love
lol

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don't hate the rainbow
~Skulls-And-Kisses:iconSkulls-And-Kisses: May 14, 2008, 4:34:15 AM
Awww, *pouts* poor Tak. That was a few cheap shots by Dib, Dib's nothing but a big meanie. I hate him now too! *frowns* Bad Dib!

Great chapter, can't wait for the rest :D

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I'm going to shoot you in the forehead with a spork shot out of a bazooka. Let's see you blink after that! :evillaugh:
~mancan71:iconmancan71: May 14, 2008, 4:39:59 AM
thanks!:bow:

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i'll come out and play as soon as i'm out of this straight jacket! ok? :crazy:

90% of teens moved on to Rap music, if your still one of the 10% that rocks out everyday add this to your sig.